Is the story I am working on in my Writing Class. So far my teacher suggested I write a back story telling about why Tatsumi is depressed,bipolar, and has 4 fingers on one hand. So I did. Here's what I wrote in very vivid detail!8D
It was a normal day in Nagoya, Japan. A 14 year old Tatsumi, 8 year old Umeko and their father Hideki decided to go for a drive. Suddenly, rain began to pour from the sky, making it impossible to see other cars, let alone any buses. The sky looked as if an artist had painted it with an array of dark grays, and blacks.
Having the feeling of insecureness, Tatsumi began to play a game with Umeko. She never suspected that a single event would change her life forever.
The sound of crunching glass, and metal being ripped apart filled the air. Hideki looked back fearfully at his daughters. He knew what had happened. The weight of the massive bus tire had been too much for the car's roof. Tatsumi screamed when she seen a small blade of glass pierce Umeko's cheek. On instinct, Umeko began to wail like a siren. CRASH!
Metal was being crushed over he fathers head. The bus tire had been too much, the roof instantly splitting, glass from the windshield flying everywhere. Tatsumi looked at her hands. Blood oozed from a wound in her left middle finger. It was only hanging on by a few threads of skin, veins were throbbing, pulsating more blood out. Too shocked to scream, too shocked to protect her younger sister from any more harm.
Ambulance sirens were heard. The door in the backseat was being ripped off. Not that it took much effort. Tatsumi was gently being pulled out, ushered by several attendants, seating her in the back of the truck. Umeko was next, several more attendants were carrying her. Umeko's tiny face was streaked with blood and tears from where metal and glass had clawed her. Tatsumi felt cold all over. Where was her father? Tatsumi could see clearly into the drivers seat. The sign of his lifeless body huddled over the steering wheel told Tatsumi all she needed to know. It was far too late to save her father, and her finger. so how was it?

YOU GOT BETTER ;___; /fails.
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Let's die in some icecream :U
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I like pancakes yes i do
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I write romance and use OC's...DEAL WITH IT!!!!!
All hot guys are either gay, taken, mine, or fictional characters.
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I like pancakes yes i do
I like pancakes how about you!!
I believe in Jesus Christ my Savior. If you do too and aren't scared to admit it then copy and paste this in your signature
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